如何主动练习长短句结合
1. 将长句拆分为短句(用于强调):
· 原句: We should protect the environment because it is essential for our survival and future generations.
· 改写: We must protect the environment. It is essential for our survival. Our future depends on it.
2. 将短句合并为长句(用于连接逻辑):
· 原句: Reading is important. It expands our knowledge. It broadens our horizons.
· 改写: Reading is vitally important, as it not only expands our knowledge but also broadens our horizons.
3. 使用分词结构/插入语创造节奏:
· 原句: He finished his work. Then he went home.
· 改写: Having finished his work, he went home. (更紧凑)
· 原句: Artificial intelligence is developing rapidly. This brings both opportunities and challenges.
· 改写: Artificial intelligence, developing at a breathtaking pace, brings both opportunities and challenges.
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