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口重要性结论②:现象分析类>利弊分析类>问题解决类>对比选择类。
第二步:构建作文框架
黄金结构:3段10句法(全文总字数150-200词为宜)
【开头段】3句
1.背景引入
[主体段】4句
2.争议焦点/问题本质
4.过渡句
3.个人立场,阐明观点
5.论证一
6.论证二
7.段落小结
【结尾段】3句
8.重申立场
9.提出措施(个人/社会)
10.未来展望
口真题示例:
2023年12月六级作文真题第一套
Direction: Directions: Suppose the university newspaper is inviting submissions from the students for it's coming edition on a campus event that has impressed them most.You are now to write an essay for submission.
开头段:
①引言句②过渡句③总结句
① We live in an age where campus events have crept into every facet of our academic life. ② It is a sober reminder that involvement in campus activities is part and parcel of our personal growth. ③ From my angle,cultural festival on campus leaves an imprint in my mind.
主体段:
④过渡句⑤论证一⑥论证二⑦小结句
④ The highlights of cultural festival can be classified into two distinct aspects. G The first one worth mentioning is that the festival boasts an avalanche of culinary flavors. ⑥ Another one revolves around the fact that each booth becomes a microcosm of a different culture, enabling visitors to immerse themselves in the diversity of human heritage. ⑦
Accordingly, both aspects mentioned are a vivid reflection of the shining
points of our cultural festival.
⑧ In a nutshell, as the cornerstone of college students' lives,
participation in campus activities can deliver enormous benefits. ⑨
Therefore, it is of paramount importance to encourage more students to
participate in campus activities. @ In this sense, only when we exert
结尾段:
⑧总结句
⑨措施句
⑩憧憬句
our utmost efforts to enhance our engagement in campus activities can
we lead a more enriched and fulfilling life.
参考译文:
开头段:①我们生活在这样一个时代,校园活动已悄然进入我们生活的方方面面。②它清醒地提醒我们,参加校园活动是我们个人成长的重要组成部分。③就我而言,大学的文化节在我心中留下了深刻的烙印。
主体段:④文化节的亮点可以分为两个不同的方面。⑤首先值得一提的是,美食节拥有丰富的美食风味。⑥另一个是,每个展台都是不同文化的缩影,让参观者身临其境地感受到人类遗产的多样性。⑦因此,上述两方面都生动体现了文化节闪光点。
结尾段:⑧简而言之,参与校园活动作为人们生活的基石,会产生巨大的切实好处。因
此,鼓励更多学生参与校园活动是至关重要的。⑩从这个意义上说,我们只有竭尽全力去
加强校园活动的参与度,才能活出更加丰富和充实的人生。
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