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来自西南医科大学-杨佳蕾发布于:2025-12-01 21:34:16
开头段 - 现象引入:Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of online education.(如今,在线教育问题越来越受关注。) - 观点对比:When it comes to part-time jobs for college students, opinions vary from person to person.(谈及大学生兼职,人们观点各不相同。) - 数据支撑:According to a recent survey, a growing number of young people prefer reading e-books to paper books.(据近期调查,越来越多年轻人更喜欢电子书而非纸质书。) 2. 主体段 - 分层论证:First and foremost, daily exercise strengthens our bodies. Secondly, it relieves our study pressure.(首先,日常锻炼能增强体质。其次,它能缓解学习压力。) - 举例论证:Take the popularity of short-video platforms as an example, they have changed people's way of entertainment.(以短视频平台的普及为例,它们改变了人们的娱乐方式。) - 因果分析:This phenomenon can be attributed to the rapid development of digital technology.(这一现象可归因于数字技术的快速发展。) 3. 结尾段 - 总结观点:In conclusion, the advantages of developing a reading habit far outweigh its trivial drawbacks.(总之,养成阅读习惯的好处远大于其微小的不足。) - 提出建议:It is advisable for schools to organize more cultural activities to enrich students' campus life.(学校不妨多组织文化活动,丰富学生的校园生活。) - 展望未来:Only by combining theory with practice can college students enhance their practical abilities.
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